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Oh and about the Magic War main character?

She will never catch a break. She is the one who will be put down a lot! Not every main character is a badass; she I will be far from one. Do NOt expect her to suddneky win through the power of friendship.

kf she is outmatched, she stays outmatched during a fight.

If she isn't, then she isn't !

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Little-Snowbird Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2017
Well, I'm glad that things are going to be hectic for our hero in this.  Because life isn't fair, by any stretch of the imagination.  And rebels against the status quo typically are the underdogs; they have it rough, and have to struggle.  This makes the story more realistic.

Oh wow.  I just came up with an interesting idea for an element in this story, if you're interested in hearing it.
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2017
And that is?
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:iconlittle-snowbird:
Little-Snowbird Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2017
I found myself wondering if people are trafficking magical kids to make a fortune off of them; by either turning them in to the authorities or selling them to people who want something special in their grasp.
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017
That can be expanded in the prologue series :)
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:iconlittle-snowbird:
Little-Snowbird Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017
Ah.  I thought it might be a nice side plot to work with.
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017
Well then nrxt chapter has implications of that bit honestly if you wanna write a scabario like this set between 2012-16 (2016 is where magic war the story is set) , you can. Just send me the basic idea and I can give rescrurions like which characters to use just so it doesn't clash with th main story 
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Little-Snowbird Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017
Okay.  Should I send you the basic idea in a note or is telling it here okay?
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017
Note 
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Master-of-the-Boot Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
By the way, how would you feel if I did a Magic War side chapter? Just a little self contained something in the universe you've set up. It wouldn't have any major impact on your central plot
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2017
What would happen in it? And where would it be taken place?
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Master-of-the-Boot Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Well the rough idea I have now is that Lars from Steven Universe and Pacifica Northwest are on the run from Hugo Strange's men when they're kidnapped by Jasper, who's been cured of corruption at the cost of her sanity. 

Jasper takes the two to an abandoned plantation in Louisiana where's she's been planning revenge on Steven and also makes and sells human chili because she's picked up darker versions of Amethyst's eating habits. 

It's an extremely, extremely rough idea. But the theory is to just do something really crazy in the magic world universe; show really that the world has gone to hell and regular humans and more magical creatures are butchering one another in the streets and dark alleyways
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2017
Okay I have some ressctitions: 

1. Have it set a year into the war.  Series 3 wise for Steven universe . After series 2 for gravity falls. 

2. As this is a plot point for my story...gravity falls is compromised. Hugo has men searching for all citizens, demanding info on where the pine twins are. Jasper goes against her orders and kidnaps the two
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Master-of-the-Boot Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I'm happy to abide by your rules. 

I'd be happy to set it in that timeline, And yes I'd love to do Gravity falls as compromised and Jasper defying Hugo's orders for personal reasons. 

Your restrictions are reasonable and they add to the fun :) I look forward to this whenever it comes around
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2017
Yeah trust me..Strange is after the pines for a big reason..and gf..well alll those triangles were bound to het his intertets.
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Master-of-the-Boot Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for telling me this, it's going to make it a lot more fun to do a side piece. Plus I admire in general how well thought out the story is. 

Overall Hugo is shaping up to be the perfect antagonist. 
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Master-of-the-Boot Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Good, I like stories where the odds are forever against you
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