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Reflection time on old stories ...

Loran's Wrath...a story I pitched to :iconjussonic: back in the day,. I thought okay, yeah we can do something..

Until i realised he wanted to tie in everything canon related to the MLP franchise, it would become so confusing.

Anyways, I'm not really proud of the idea, this was back when I was still new to the series and honestly had too many ideas. Maybe I pitched it wrong.

but then other writers got involved and the idea was suffering really badly;

1. Inconsistent characterisations

2. Too many fight scenes that are just copy and paste from other franchises .

3. Clones everywhere for some reason.

4. No consequences.

5. So little of my actual idea was gone.

So..that's why I wanted to spare Lorcan and bring him back with a story I WANNA see him go through but that fell through again.

So..Yes..i'm not happy with this story. It could have bene better if there wasnt so much creative differences.

3/10

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Master-of-the-Boot Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I feel you, while I've never gone for a truly collaborative effort, much of my old work is cringe city. 

At least you've grown to the point where you recognize all your past and present problems, weaknesses and know how to improve yourself. 

That's more than I can say for Jus, he's still the same as ever. 
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nigel5469 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're not the only one feel that way. I was angry and disappointed as you are about the ideas I have for Friendship Games Remake but it was screwed badly and all was destroyed. It got me to throw tantrum.

I know that feeling from two years ago.
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